I started this novel oh ... about forty years ago? In that time it has been through any number of edits and re-writes. I never lost my fondness for it, and have often turned to reading it for fun during more trying times myself. Now I'm putting it up free on Literotica in hopes of some good feedback.
It's very exciting to get good scores on Literotica (I'm talking the ratings here!), however it means something special when you get comments. Then you find out how your readers took your story, whether they were drawn in by it or what it was that didn't quite work for them. Get your fingers tapping; let us writers know what you thought!
My novel is a swashbuckling bodice-ripper with lots of tossing of lace cuffs, sneering by candlelight and heaving of passionate silk-clad bosoms. I'm looking for feedback from the fantasy romance crowd - you know who you are. If you like a bit of swash to your buckle and flirting over a fan-tasy, check out my tale of derring-do: A Match for the el Maiens, and let me know what you think.
When Commander-Lord Vadya el Gaiel van H’las' father proposes a match, he knows
it must be political. The most likely
candidate is the enigmatic Lady Anastelle el Maien van Sietter. Vadya's father hopes she is a modest maiden living quietly with the famously
chaste Lady Arianna el Jien van
Sietter, Lady wife to Commander-Lord Clair el Maien. But why is Vadya's
Captain, Tashka Maien, so sensitive about her honour? And what keeps the
Lady Arianna, fair as a candle flame, in the el Maiens’ rambling
old castle home full of dark secrets?
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